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#1
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 1:05 AM
That is, a feeling of a tapestry of events - like a Paul Thomas Anderson film or the like - there were so many stories going on, all linked together, and occuring at the same time, but there was just so much going on.
But I think this was partly because the overlying question seemed to be "who is evil". Thus, in season 1, every scene had to be from the point-of-view of one of the five main cast members, or focus on an established bad guy. Season 2 had so many concurrent storylines, often taking place within the same building (like the bunker, or at CTU) and even when they were annoying, there was so much to watch that it felt much more like we were watching the events of one day.
Sadly, I don't see it happening this season, because at the moment it seems we have just three storylines: the action at New/Mexico, the exposition at CTU and the "political intrigue" at Palmer's.
#2
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 2:08 AM
This season seems a lot tighter in that respect, in part because the Singer family drama was kept fairly brief and usually involved characters who were actually interesting anyway. Palmer's storyline has dragged, but even that has been infused with interesting moments on occasion. Now that Dr. Anne is out of the way, hopefully they'll move on to better things and bring Palmer's story back to the level it was at early in Season 2.
#3
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 1:50 PM
#4
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 3:10 PM
Edited by Elliot, Jan 4, 2004 @ 3:10 PM.
#5
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 6:43 PM
I also really like that we have two major antagonists so far, as opposed to last season's almost Villain of the Week approach. Much more effective and interesting. Last year we had about 10 new villains introduced in the last two epihours alone. Whether you let it go at the time or not, there's no one who really gave a damn about Kingsley or Max or that dude in the cafe.
#6
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 10:22 PM
Benji, I'm blanking about your "cafe" reference. Help?!?
Edited by Elliot, Jan 4, 2004 @ 10:29 PM.
#7
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 11:01 PM
#8
Posted Jan 4, 2004 @ 11:55 PM
#9
Posted Jan 5, 2004 @ 12:10 AM
Edited by fwmom, Jan 5, 2004 @ 12:11 AM.
#10
Posted Jan 5, 2004 @ 2:28 AM
Alexander Trepkos... what a great name, and I half hope to see his return just so it won't be squandered. It's not one of those generic TV names like Ted Wilson or John Baker or something.
#11
Posted Jan 5, 2004 @ 2:10 PM
#12
Posted Jan 5, 2004 @ 3:36 PM
#13
Posted Jan 5, 2004 @ 10:35 PM
Edited by Elliot, Jan 5, 2004 @ 10:53 PM.
#14
Posted Jan 17, 2004 @ 11:22 PM
#15
Posted Jan 17, 2004 @ 11:42 PM
For me, though, the difference between season one and this season is that season one had a central mystery running through it that needed to be solved: why was someone targeting Kiefer and Palmer? First there was Mandy and she turned out to be working for Gaines. Just when they got ahold of Gaines, they realized that Gaines was only fronting for Drazen and then once they knew about Drazen they had to extrapolate that he wanted revenge on Kiefer and Palmer for mowing down Drazen's family. In other words, the villain switcheroo that was going on in season one was like the peeling of an onion. Each villain brought them closer to the essense of the mystery. This season, the villains are switching but it's more episodic. There's no central mystery to all of this, it's just "oh, wow, it's Nina!" And Nina isn't behind the Salazars, she's just the one who got the virus. It's like a game of "Keep Away" as opposed to "Hide and Seek."
Edited by Gustave, Jan 17, 2004 @ 11:44 PM.
#16
Posted Jan 18, 2004 @ 12:55 AM
The continued strong presence of Nina, Sherry, David, Kim (let's not count her as a CTU character for the sake of argument!), Los Angeles and eventually Jack-as-action-hero ultimately amount to constraints on the fluidity and direction of the series. Granted, people do seem to demand to see the returns of Nina and Sherry (and Mandy, even!), but after a short while, appearances by those characters simply revisit old ground and will spell D-O-O-M for 24. I'm enjoying S3 a great deal, but perhaps the product could have been even better had the writers had the freedom to write a story without baggage. Perhaps next season Jack can be bumped to an administrative position and appear in a supporting role (if he's still alive), or maybe the action can take place elsewhere and forego CTU and the Bauer/Palmer families altogether in favor of another context, with a total of only 1-3 recurring characters. In any case, the show needs to remain fresh and challenging to be successful, and treading on familiar ground seems to me to be exactly the wrong way to go. I think TPTB can get away with it for this season but no longer than that.
Edited by Elliot, Jan 18, 2004 @ 12:58 AM.
#17
Posted Jan 18, 2004 @ 2:17 AM
#18
Posted Jan 18, 2004 @ 4:29 PM
I never thought I'd say this, but I am all up for a whole new story/whole new 24-verse for next season, but with possibly the same actors in whole new roles.
This wouldn't work for me. It might have after season one, when it was suggested by alot of the online posters. But after 3 seasons, we have an established universe and I doubt the public at large is willing to jump at an opportunity to revisit the '24' verse with actors in new roles.
I think for a season 4 to succeed its need a massive infusion of new acting & writing talent.
Assuming Kiefer's survives the day, I would look at dropping all the regulars but Bauer and perhaps Chase. This doesen't preclude the odd guest appearance from Kim, Palmer, & company, but they need to removed from the main plotlines. It probably should have happened this year. Would the Season 3 storyline been any better or worse if Kim Bauer was in college and called her dad in the the season opener ala Kate Warner?
As well, I would drop the CTU LA setting and developing a more international look and feel to the series. This would include multiple settings and hopefully multiple 'A' plots which would converge at some point.
And new writers... people willing to make better use of the 'real time' format. As Sutherland has noted, the format is the star of the series and it needs to be much better utilized.
Edited by pleonasm, Jan 18, 2004 @ 4:31 PM.
#19
Posted Jan 18, 2004 @ 7:51 PM
One of the easiest uses of the realtime format is the chase. These are scenes that are presented (more or less) in realtime in the vast majority of movies and TV shows, because it's simply more exciting that way. From time to time 24 has used them quite effectively, including, as someone mentioned upthread, the somewhat unorthodox chase scene in S1 when Jack takes the stairs to race Ted Cofell (in the elevator) to the parking garage.
Even the overall conflict of each season has been a variation of the chase format. It's a race to find the bad guys before something bad happens to Jack's family or to Palmer. It's a race to find the B-O-M-B before it blows up, and then a race to find the Cypress source recordings before the country goes to war. It's a race to find the V-I-R-U-S before it's released into the public, and then a similar race for the V-I-R-U-S on a grander scale.
So I think from a macro standpoint, the show and the format still work. But looking at individual episodes, it sometimes doesn't feel that anyone is really racing towards anything.
One thing that I really like from some other action shows is the "opening gambit." For the two or three minutes before the first commercial break, we're thrust into an exciting scene that somehow leads into the rest of the episode. The last time an episode of 24 has started off with an exciting scene was the season premiere. Usually episodes end on exciting moments, and the next week the show picks up on one of the other storylines. I'd really like to see an episode get off to a running start like that; perhaps literally starting with someone running. Not only would that set the pace for the rest of the episode, but it might help the writers remember that the the whole show is a race against time and that people should actually be racing.
Edited because I, use way, too many, commas,.
Edited by dzhim, Jan 18, 2004 @ 8:05 PM.
#20
Posted Jan 19, 2004 @ 7:49 AM
One thing that I really like from some other action shows is the "opening gambit." For the two or three minutes before the first commercial break, we're thrust into an exciting scene that somehow leads into the rest of the episode. The last time an episode of 24 has started off with an exciting scene was the season premiere. Usually episodes end on exciting moments, and the next week the show picks up on one of the other storylines.
The most effective use of this as a tone-setting technique that I can recall on 24 was Mandy's descent at the beginning of S1. I think that given the competing storylines, it'd be hard to do this during the middle of the season, particularly at the points when TPTB don't seem to consider a single storyline dominant (we might, but they don't!). Events like the plane crash and the nuclear blast lend themselves to it...it might have been fun if last season we'd seen nothing but news reports and panic from, say, 11:00-11:05 PM. I'm sure there's a forthcoming mid-season disaster, so maybe we'll see it then.
I'm not sure having the same actors in different roles (would the actors even go for that?) would work on a large scale. I could theoretically see one person, maybe Leslie Hope, making a brief appearance as something like an overseas agent during a crisis planning session, which would allow for a few low-key moments for us watching Jack (assuming he's still alive) trying to concentrate.
#21
Posted Feb 6, 2004 @ 11:59 PM
#22
Posted Feb 7, 2004 @ 11:32 AM
Anyway, I wrote to Fox asking them to consider a 24 soundtrack.
#23
Posted Feb 7, 2004 @ 12:14 PM
#24
Posted Feb 7, 2004 @ 3:31 PM
Why aren't more people watching this show?
I've been asking myself this question for about 24 months. I think the answer lies at least partly in why so many people are watching shows like Jim, which are more comfortable, less demanding, less complicated, and so on.
Also, at least some of the success of Law and Order and CSI lie in their accessibility for the casual, sometime viewer (I believe the X-Files ran into a bit of trouble when it focused more intensely on its conspiracy storyline -- i.e., a serialized approach). 24 asks alot from its viewership, which is particularly satisfying for those of us who are willing to make the investment, but not so good from a ratings maximization standpoint in 2004. People in general seem to prefer their shows wrapped in nice 30- or 60-minute packages, and often bland. 24 suffers for that.
That's the best I can figure, anyway.
#25
Posted Feb 7, 2004 @ 4:23 PM
#26
Posted Feb 7, 2004 @ 8:55 PM
That might be it but I don't think its the viewers' fault.Yeah, the only reason I can see for the midway turnoff that has been documented is viewers feeling totally confused and overwhelmed by it.
24 is complicated - but not complex. Put aside the twist-in-a-twist-in-a-twist-mode and not much of a story is left - and even less of any logic.
And yes, it demands a lot of attention and dedication but it doesn't pay off as much as the first season, plus - and that really bugged me - it lies to its viewers: e.g., when we followed Jack in the first episodes there was no indication at all that he had planed those events though we observed him and his co-conspirators in moments when it should have been obvious.
Don't get me wrong, I like surprises and twists but that was simply cheating (by camera) - much worse than the decision to make Nina the bad girl in season one because that seemed to have been a late addition to the story - and not planed out from the start.
So I can forgive them that, at first, they showed us Nina doing things in a way that were not consistent with the later revelation.
Add to the overly complicated story and cheap tricks all those violations of the basic formula (the real time format) plus a million cliches plus some bland characters and lacklustre play and you are left with a diminished audience.
Just my point of view, of course.
#27
Posted Feb 7, 2004 @ 9:36 PM
The more I think about it, the more I think they must have. One, because it's Kiefer and I suspect that something like this would have his say-so. But also if they were filming episodes 1-2, I assume they'd be prepping episodes 3-4, so they'd be writing episodes 5-6 and breaking episodes 7-8. The writers must have known while the episode was being filmed, I'd think. And I can't see them not communicating with Kiefer on the scripts. If Sarah Clarke demanded to know her arc...
#28
Posted Feb 8, 2004 @ 12:17 AM
Don't get me wrong, I like surprises and twists but that was simply cheating (by camera) - much worse than the decision to make Nina the bad girl in season one because that seemed to have been a late addition to the story - and not planed out from the start.
No way, IMHO. The Nina twist opened huge doors for the series and brought brilliant moments, but that was an outright cheat that was not even considered for the first 2/3 of season 1. I'm absolutely positive that Jack going undercover was planned from the first episode of season 3. TPTB had promised a while back that there would never again be a CTU mole, for instance, so the Gael switcheroo makes total sense. There's other things like Jack's knowledge that someone from CTU would coordinate the plane in episode 6 that make no sense without the twist. Nina's twist clarified nothing that came before and really didn't fit much with anything. Also, Tony and Jack were never alone in a scene together ever period this season. Ditto for Tony/Gael and Jack/Gael.
#29
Posted Feb 8, 2004 @ 8:48 AM
I watched the first two episodes again to check whether my impression of another cheat was wrong or could be backed up by evidence. Here are some examples:Also, Tony and Jack were never alone in a scene together ever period this season. Ditto for Tony/Gael and Jack/Gael.
- The very first conversation between Jack and Tony about the virus in ep. 1 (around 11 minutes after its start) indicates real concern on both sides though that could also be explained by their awareness of the whole situation. However, Jack's hesitance and facial expressions after Tony's question if there might be a connection to the Salazars is less understandable given the fact that he stands with his back towards all people in the room and no one else listens to Tony's words - they just listen to Jack's words and his "I don't know" could have been the answer to any question.
- Why does Tony have that intense conversation with Michelle about Langley (15 min. in the episode) if he knows things will start today and might put him in a situation where a "promotion" is very unlikely to happen? - After all, he is going to break a lot of laws and his name is not Jack Bauer. It's all a bit like cheating on your wife and Tony is really not the type to play Michelle in such a way.
- Why didn't we get any hint that Hector knew about Jack's involvement even when things started to get complicated and he yelled at Gael more than ones? Is he really the man to not mention the primarily responsible person in such situations?
- Where did those dead bodies come from at the Salazar ranch if they never were in possession of the virus? That scene and the resulting ones were only there to cheat on the audience and not on anyone involved in the events inside the story.
There are also some gaps in the plan that make the conspirators look stupid - if they really had planned ahead, e.g.:
- If Jack had worked with Charly Brown for months and months he must have been aware of his tendency to, ahm, interpret orders in a way that makes sure he wouldn't be excluded from any action. Why didn't the conspirators have any plan to contain or distract Charly when their plans were ripe? The information that Kim was dating him was a surprise for Jack, so the following orders to "exclude" him couldn't have been the result of any prior intention. He might have used the chance but I'm sure those seasoned agents had a much better plan to distract Charly and should have stayed with it ;-).
- Why didn't they involve Michelle? We know what she is willing to do since season 2 so a lack of trust can't be the reason. The only rationale I can see is that Tony didn't want to endanger his wife's career as well. But even that explanation has a lot of holes given the fact that he knew for certain that his involvement would be revealed at some point and that Michelle would certainly prove to stand loyal by his side.
- Why did Jack tell Luis (?) on the phone in ep. 2 (19 min in the ep.) that Salazar "might walk"? He knew how eager Luis was to put Ramon behind the bars and he couldn't have missed how emotional he was about it. And shouldn't Jack have figured out something to distract him, too? Luis would have been a major obstacle in breaking Ramon out and I don't think Jack was part of the plan to kill another agent the way we saw it happen.
From other episodes:
- Why was Jack so surprised to find out that the bag-o'Kyle didn't contain the virus?
- When CTU found out that Kyle was in the mall - why didn't the conspirators make sure that he could escape before CTU moved in? Obviously, they still needed him to be free at that point.
- And anyway, why, oh why did those veteran agents come up with a plan that included in central position an unstable wildcard like Kyle Singer? Too many things could go wrong with that boy and they had not enough fail safes to compensate for any major problem - as we have seen happen.
I'm sure that there is more evidence in the following episodes but right now I'm too lazy to watch them all again. I hope I've already given enough reason to make my point a valid one (though, of course, not the only possible one).
Edited by MarcusH, Feb 8, 2004 @ 8:55 AM.
#30
Posted Feb 8, 2004 @ 10:35 AM
I'm still not sure whether it was a total cheat, though; I can just as easily believe that they had the undercover twist planned but just got sloppy in their eagerness to fake us out.







