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[QueenInsane]

Cool.... That was shiney. Is there any other place to read it than here? Are you working on other episodes?

[orale12345]

Here's an idea I had , it's not so good but here it is.

background story:
Logan and Veronica are 35 and have been married for 8 years and have been together for 10. They live in Neptune and they have a 5 year old daughter who is their inter world.
Logan is a lawyer and he owns his own law firm with his best friend since collage {not dick!} who was also the one to push him into law school. His friend and his wife are best friends with Logan and Veronica and they have a girl and a boy the girl is a year bigger.
After freshmen year in collage Veronica stayed with Piz for 3 years but it was always an easy relationship and very comfortable, Logan and Veronica become very good friends and when she went into her FBI training in DC Logan got excepted to a low school there as well as his friend so they become a group of friends.
Wallace , Mac and Veronica had a falling out, When Piz and Veronica broke up he took Pizes side also he saw that Logan took his place as her best friend and he also accused her of leading Piz on for 3 years while being still in love with Logan after collage they just stopped talking and Veronica's last tray to make peace with him was inviting him to her wedding but he never showed , Mac and Veronica just grow apart over the years.

the story:
The Ecollse family comes home one day to discover Wallace sitting on their porch, after almost 15 years of not talking Wallace sics Veronica's help when he has been accused of killing a little girl{age of 5} after being the last person seen with her,the girl was non other then his best friend girl Piz.
Veronica and Logan {veronica with her PI skills and Logan as his lawyer} will tray to help him prove he is innocent and fiend the real murder.


PS: Veronica quit the FBI after Kari was born she didn't like working for them and Kari's birth was a perfect excuse for her to stop fighting for something she doesn't like and she now works with her dad as a PI as his partner.

[Confidencecohen]

And so Free Cake makes me sad that we won't be getting a season 4 premiere any time soon. I enjoyed it though, planning on writing any more? I was especially glad it was script format, adds the authenticity I like when someone continues a television show in a "virtual season" format.

[Free Cake]

Hey, Confidencecohen! Thanks, and yes I do planning on writing more. An entire season! All 22 episodes. I will get there, hah.

Anyway, http://neon-genocidal.livejournal.com is where I'll be presenting the episodes. The final version of my premiere is up, with a few changes to the other draft.

Feel free to spread the link around, hee ;).

[GoGoMort]

After the finale I got this idea in my head of how the show should be continued ...

It involves a time-jump, so we revisit Veronica when she´s just joined the FBI and our girl is all fired up and ready to take down the Russian mafia - much like she was intent on taking down the 09ers in S1. Her motivation in her war is the killing of her one and only love (maybe not only, since we started her journey with Duncan, but at least it was her true love!) Logan. So basicly, somewhere between the end of S3 and now - goran had him killed, and I would like to think it was not too long after the fight, cause really how long can you hold a grudge over a fight - even when you belong to the mafia?!?

And to get back the original feel of things, she was not only motivated by a REALLY personal crime but also had visions/hallucinations/dreams/flashbacks featuring Logan. And she will be busy revenging Logans death for quite some time - but for the time being it would not be her "official" assignment in her work, more like a sidejob, but eventually when she starts making some real headway she´ll be on the case 24/7 ...

In my perfect dream, Wallace is playing in the NBA and still is Veronicas BFF and oh just so happens to be playing for the team closest to her home. And since I have NO belive that Neptune is hosting their very own FBI-offices, Keith will have followed Veronica and is continuing his practice close to her. Mac is also still around, cause we all know the FBI needs computer wiz's too :-)

And since I won´t be seeing this on my TV-screen any time soon, I know exactly how the first line in Veronica Mars:FBI - the movie will be: Hi, welcome to XXX, the FBI headquarters - my new place of work. The reason I´m here? Logan Echolls, my one and only love. He was viciously murdered by the Russian Mafia, and I? I´m gonna take them all down, and why? 'Cause the bad man ALLWAYS has to pay!

This post has been edited by GoGoMort: Jul 3, 2007 @ 5:27 pm.

[NicoleMN6]

I had an idea of where I would have liked the show to go. I wouldn't want to see Logan killed off, because I think the character and his interactions with everyone - not just with Veronica - add a lot to the show.

So, what about the Russian mafia guy not managing to kill Logan - but paralyzing him? Logan would be great as a bitter, wounded guy - and that would take care of Veronica wanting to go after the Russian mafia, with help from Weevil and Mac, but her dad and Logan being very upset with her and trying to protect her. Plus, I'd like to see how Logan would deal with not being able to surf or ... do other things ... it would create a lot of good conflict and character development. I can imagine scenes where he's pushing Veronica away (shoe on the other foot!) because he thinks she should be with someone who can walk, or he's upset about not being able to satisfy her, etc. And in fighting the Russian mafia, maybe Veronica would even forge some sort of unholy alliance with the Fitzpatricks, who don't like the Russians coming in on their turf... and maybe the Castle plays into this somehow, too. (Or is a future mystery.)

Damn, too bad this show is over.

[Editor-In-Chief]

In my fantasy life, I begged Rob Thomas to kill off Lianne because a) she was kind of a horrible person and b) her death would have such a profound effect on Veronica.

So Lianne is found dead in a seedy apartment or hotel room (such as the Camelot, just for old times' sake) in a scene eerily reminiscent of the pilot. Her death is ruled a suicide, and given her stormy relationships with Messrs. Stoli, Daniels, Cuervo, and Morgan, local Sheriff van Lowe dismisses any suspicions of homicide.

Veronica, uncertain whether or not to believe the official reports, initially accepts the ruling and tries to move on. When evidence contradicting the sheriff's department emerges, she is torn between letting go of her maternal demons and avenging what could be Lianne's murder. (So basically the opposite of the Lilly SL, and this one has the nifty angle of making Keith a prime suspect!)

I love the idea of Veronica and Wiedman working together on some sort of upscale espionage project. And we've already seen how well Weevil and Keith work together, so revisiting that would've been really cool, too.

::sighs mournfully::

[PrincessOrchid]

Freecake: I thought that was amazing! DAMN! I'm dying to see what happens now...

This post has been edited by PrincessOrchid: Sep 7, 2007 @ 1:03 pm.

[spikedgirl]

I hope that every single one of you writes fanfic, because all of your scenarios were great!

For me I'd pretty much just be happy to see VM again, no matter what direction it went!

[nowisthetime]

After watching the FBI trailer, and hearing JD's thoughts about how Logan would have fit in there, I would really like to see Logan as an FBI suspect that Veronica and her partner from the trailer (I'll call him AK, since I can't remember his VMS4name, if he even has one) have to investigate. I would think this storyline would have to occur almost midway through the season, once Veronica has begun to trust and like AK, and then have a huge dilemma where all the evidence points to Logan being guilty, and AK thinks he is, so she's torn between the two. AK's mad at her for letting her feelings get in the way of her job, and Logan's mad that she doesn't believe him, etc.

This post has been edited by nowisthetime: Oct 25, 2007 @ 12:43 pm.